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Away 4 Love Chapter 13
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A Poem For My Dear FriendA Poem For My Dear Friend
I want to find that someone to love, To always be there to hug, Always there to love.
Brother and I argue, Me and sister scream, Parents always frightening over nothingness it seems.
Friends never to seem be there, Or I can’t express the coldness I bare, Only there when I start to cry, Then they suddenly walk out my life.
I can’t seem to find peace, No matter where I go, Always running in circles, No place to call home.
I want to find that someone to love, To always be there for A Poem For My Dear Friend
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Away 4 Love Chapter 12{Ryan’s View}
“I can’t anymore. The more I’m around you the more I’m at danger. I can’t risk it.” I sob into my hands. “I have to stop. I have to stop being around you all together.”
He pulls away my hands straight away from my face locking his hands on my cheeks as he kisses me. I feel alive? Why? Is it because I feel there is something more to the kiss or what? Or is it just when I kiss him I just seem to fade away from this confusing world.
{Steve’s View}
I kiss him deep and don’t unlock. I keep him near me and don’t let him go. Away 4 Love Chapter 12
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Wed Nov 11, 2009, 11:04 AM

Hay everyone, just bene having a hard time at the mo...I haven't been able to write anything for months and it's depressing. I really badly wnat to write books when I'm older and work at a manga publishing company but I don't think I have what it takes. Why is life so hard?

Well anyway on another notice I am thinking of starting to draw some manga soon and see how things go from there. Oh and I a have other books as well on another website called 'Bebo' but these are old books from when I first started writing so there not as good and a bit rushed but still if your intrested have a loook

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Hi I'm Eva, I'm 15 years old and I'm praticing too become a author when I'm older and have been writing chapter for some books of mine. I'm only a beginner and will hope to improve in the future.

I have have fun writing...{Lol no life}

Plz check out my wrting if you click on Newests. That's has my stories on there and I hope you all enjoy.

I love anime and I obossed with it. I also love my bets friends so much since we've been through so much and I also like sports and stuff.

Lol. If you click on 'Newest' it's got my first book on there with the chapters and everything. Plz enjoy.

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~MasonMaddness Sep 24, 2009, 3:01:54 PM

thanksssss for the fav :]]

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~Laviness Sep 9, 2009, 8:00:41 AM

Thank you very much. The next book I do I will try third person which is my week point so it will be a great challange for me. Thank youuuuxxx

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~TimberWillow Sep 3, 2009, 7:02:30 PM

Hey. I read some of your work like you asked. As for improvements, I would say you're off to a good start.

It is more common to write in third person (s/he) rather than first person (I). You might bring in a wider audience if you use third person. Although it sounds strange, people can relate better to "he" or "she" than they can with "I".

~avatarcrazy727 Sep 2, 2009, 3:11:16 PM

of course ill look at your work... and thanks for the future feedback... always a good thing

.... ill b happy to leave comments for you as well

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~Laviness Sep 2, 2009, 10:21:41 AM

yr very welcome. Keep up the work. I really like your work. I';; be in touch and I will be levaiing comments on your work. If you ever have time would you look at mine. I wenat loads of feedbakc on ym work because being an autor I am I need to see what peopel think of my work if I'm ever goign to get better.
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~ShadowShini Sep 1, 2009, 4:23:48 PM

Thank you for the watch!~

~avatarcrazy727 Sep 1, 2009, 5:12:24 AM

omgs thanks sooo much for the watch

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*chibilombax Jul 20, 2009, 9:08:16 AM

thanks for the fav

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*chaotic-anime-power Jun 28, 2009, 5:02:18 AM

i tagged you!go to my journal and copy the rules ^_^

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~MasonMaddness Jun 16, 2009, 11:36:57 AM

Thank you so much for the fav and watch :]

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~L-forever Jun 15, 2009, 12:01:03 PM

thanks for the

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The hawk on fire hangs still. Dilly dilly, calls the loft hawk, come and be killed. Dilly dilly, come let us die.

it's those stupid things we say in the rain, the words that can't ever be washed away.}